I'm an amateur at writing so I thought I'd ask for help as to how well I'm doing so far... This is what I've got:
The day was bright, birds chirped and the other students were on their way to the school grounds. Where was I? I was still in my house like a normal human sleeping, well at least until she burst through my door that is. With a swift motion she unlocked my apartment door, opened my bedroom door and pulled me onto the floor yelling "I overslept!" There was a long silence between us, as I was in my underwear and she had only just now realized that we were alone. The smack she gave me echoed through the neighborhood as I yelled in p